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April 18th, 2017, 5:00 am

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Reply jason112usa, April 18th, 2017, 5:11 am

please kill this ass I hate him more now

Reply Xaryna, April 18th, 2017, 12:51 pm

How to make readers dislike a character immediately... A perfectly executed example.

Reply zackbiggs, April 18th, 2017, 11:53 pm

Made to Hate. Perfect timing too, Add some conflict to replace the old. Should prove interesting with Cain too since this should cause waves without capsizing the relationship. Since I don't know many people who wouldn't project some of their anger on Nick. Not a full blown fight but annoyance is certain and it should be a good stopgap to keep them from getting too close too fast. Nice work.... perfect 'made to hate' character too. especially since Cory and Cain share a lot of features. which is going to make them naturally competitive for Nick's time. Also it's not hard to imagine Cory having a thing for Nick that never panned out. The chick on his sweater is a sure sign he's socially awkward but not a sure sign he's not in the closet so *Shrug*. Anyways loving it so far, keep it up.

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